Angela Ackerman – Show don’t tell pt 2

Describing emotion: balancing show and tell Body language and action Thoughts Internal sensations Dialogue   Body language In active storytelling, action is king 93% of all communication is non verbal Primal instinct is at work (constantly aware of our environment) We are all adept body language readers (and so are our story readers) Use body […]

Angela Ackerman – Show don’t tell pt 1

Sharing characterisations & emotions without telling or info dumps   Do more with less If you are describing appearance, also include emotional description Learn to convey information with powerful word structure rather than writing it all out   What does ‘Show, don’t tell’ really mean? It is the drop in your stomach when you jump […]

Angela Ackerman: Larger than life characters Pt 2

And the flipside is using flaws / negative traits Hobble your character with flaws A flaw is a negative quality that emerges in a character’s personality as a result of an emotionally hurtful experience Just as we have a survival response for physical dangers (fight or flight), we instinctively protect our emotions from harm as […]

Angela Ackerman, Larger than Life characters Pt 1

Building a hero / heroine from the ground up  – What makes a reader fall in love with a character? – How can we create these types of characters ourselves? – How to create deep compelling characters that stick with a reader.   Elements:  Reader fascination: Offer a view into the characters and his world […]

Breakout 5: Self-Defence For Women: How To Write a Fight Scene – RWAus14

Susanna Rogers – 2nd degree black belt in kickboxing, published romance author.  Publishes under the name Nina Blake  likes to feel powerful teaches kickboxing can’t run, catch or throw, but can kick and punch   When in stressful situation or danger:  fight or flight mechanism kicks in Physiological changes include: heart rate rises increased blood […]

Breakout 4: The Dark Side: Psychology, psychopathy and stalking – RWAus14

I have to admit that I had a great time at the dinner on Saturday night, and went to a room party afterwards.  I decided to sleep in a bit on Sunday morning so I missed the first session of the day (which was noted as TBA in my schedule anyway), and got there in […]

Saturday final session: AMG & Wrap up – RWAus14

Presentation of the First Sale ribbons There were quite a few this year – I think 25 or so standing at the front, and of course others who were not present.  I didn’t record names, I am sure the list will be available in Hearts Talk or on the website.  Congratulations to all 🙂 AGM:  […]

Sunday Program – RWAus14

Again, my breakout sessions are highlighted. 07:30 Registration opens 08:00 Arrival Tea & Coffee 08:20-08:30 Housekeeping 08:30-09:00 TBA  (this was the early program, not sure what ended up going here) 09:00-09:15 Harlequin Digital – Malle Valick 09:15-10:15 Audition Submission – Selected Editors & Agents 10:15-10:45 Morning Tea 10:45-12:15 Sunday Breakout Session 1 Self Publishing 101 […]

Little Gems – Moonstone: Official Launch – RWAus14

Little Gems official launch:  Moonstone Cover design:  Sheridan Kent Contest winners: Josephine Brown—The Minstrel’s Trial Rowena Candlish—Minnie’s Year Of Living Rowena Candlish—Jake’s Best Friend Heidi Catherine—My Moonstone Love N.F. David—Luna and the Moonstone Fiona Greene—The Moonstone Legacy Jennifer Hoff—The Farewell Letter Fiona Kekic—The Heart Surgeon Linda Knightley—Moonlight On Water D.D. Line—Moonstone Hill Patricia Poppenbeek—Catch Of […]