Angela Ackerman – Show don’t tell pt 2

Describing emotion: balancing show and tell Body language and action Thoughts Internal sensations Dialogue   Body language In active storytelling, action is king 93% of all communication is non verbal Primal instinct is at work (constantly aware of our environment) We are all adept body language readers (and so are our story readers) Use body […]

Angela Ackerman – Show don’t tell pt 1

Sharing characterisations & emotions without telling or info dumps   Do more with less If you are describing appearance, also include emotional description Learn to convey information with powerful word structure rather than writing it all out   What does ‘Show, don’t tell’ really mean? It is the drop in your stomach when you jump […]

Angela Ackerman: Larger than life characters Pt 2

And the flipside is using flaws / negative traits Hobble your character with flaws A flaw is a negative quality that emerges in a character’s personality as a result of an emotionally hurtful experience Just as we have a survival response for physical dangers (fight or flight), we instinctively protect our emotions from harm as […]

Angela Ackerman, Larger than Life characters Pt 1

Building a hero / heroine from the ground up  – What makes a reader fall in love with a character? – How can we create these types of characters ourselves? – How to create deep compelling characters that stick with a reader.   Elements:  Reader fascination: Offer a view into the characters and his world […]